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kitty30132
06-11-2008, 10:37 PM
are you on my side
do you listen when i pray
do i really exist at all
do you really catch me when i fall
have you collected my tears, through out all these years
am i still in good graces

your in control
is their anything that you want to know
i will answer you
if you answer my prayers

do you believe in me
like i have faith in you
can you hold me and tell me that its ok
cause i really need it right now
can you give me that
please

do you want to play
ill play
tell me the rules
and the game
love me
as i dance on stage
that you made
ill quicken my pace to your rhythm
ill try my hardest to keep up
while following your foot steps
ill ignore the rest
the audience is blind to us

because my heart is your heart
and i feel yours beat as mine beats
and i promise you that ill never give up
ill never fail you
ill keep you IN my heart
because your my creator
with out you i dont exist
and you are my hope and faith for living

dr00
06-16-2008, 06:37 PM
"make me believe you mean all those things i make you say"

kitty30132
06-16-2008, 06:42 PM
who are you quoting ?

dr00
06-16-2008, 06:56 PM
me, actually. lol


shit poem i posted forever ago lol.
lemme try and find it <_<

dr00
06-16-2008, 07:04 PM
finally found it...


http://www.edmplanet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=14558
umm... it's bad.
lol ;(

kitty30132
06-16-2008, 08:25 PM
no, that was really good!
sounds like something id write

dr00
06-16-2008, 09:28 PM
aww WELL THEN IT'S GOOD.


i don't write like that anymore. idk, i guess we're always our own worst critic. i usually end up hating everything i write eventually.
like i'm never 100% satisfied with anything really

kitty30132
06-17-2008, 09:36 AM
thats ok. thats why i call all my work "spit" theirs no point to it. its just to get it out of me. i dont look for much more then that instant gratification from it. i just like writing. i journal i keep books in my car purse ill stop and write down my thoughts in mid stride of walking.

dr00
06-17-2008, 06:56 PM
lmao i do that too.


sometimes i'll have thoughts bang around in my head for a week or a month and then they all come together and sometimes i just sit down and type something out in about 10-15min