And here's Jean with the weather

[Jesse James]

It's brisk
The air has an aura of change about it
It's a good scent
Clandestine
You can take me there if you want
Though I doubt
You have the efficiency to do anything
At all
And though I'm there
You are in another realm
Watching for the sun
The truth is it has already begun
Around you
The hate, the violence
The terror

My love,
I'm sorry, but
you were always watching the weather.

[Dylan]

Nice! I love that last line... :)

[Jesse James]

Well thanks homie.

I think I pondered over that line for about 4 hours before I wrote it!

I've been reading too much Questionable Content......

[Jesse James]

Man... For real?

:/

[Waldemar]

Haha! Your poetry just got spammed and not slammed.

[tripeboi]

I dig it.
I like the last 3 lines.

[*TrIPsTar*]

Veddy nice m8 :)

[Jesse James]

Haha! Your poetry just got spammed and not slammed.

My last response was to the spam! LOL

I'm glad you caught that!