Dnb Heads check it out

[ReDeYeJuNgLiSt]

Ok this is my newest track the best ive done so far so give me positive n negative feed back people only thing i see with it is the timming other than that sounds good to me so tell what the dnb massive thinks and if any one rememebers the first track I did ,Ive came a long way from that



Krucial Pleasures
http://www.mp3.com/SonikSoulja

[Matthew Skye]

I did have something longer typed up, then IE errored and closed, so heres what i remember:

I like the drums, and the sound quality to the drums. The drum programming was decent. I didn't like it when the snare went off beat, when the snare wasnt on 2 and 4. I liked the way you worked the build ups with the semi4/4 beat, but i feel that, especially in the main break down, that the builds arent in time and feel weird. The whole song felt odd in that nothing was on time... i.e. major builds after a certain amount of measures, breakdowns after a certain amount of measures, bringing intruments in/out at the proper time.

The strings and the bassline felt odd and unmusical. Although i liked the quality of the sound of both instruments, they felt disjointed.

[ReDeYeJuNgLiSt]

Now that is what i call feed back
I really apperciate it im still working on it jsu wanted to get an ideal of where i need to go with it ,you have been much help

[Matthew Skye]

Glad to help. What programs/hardware do you use?

[ReDeYeJuNgLiSt]

fl 3 right now

[Matthew Skye]

Cool. I'll be sure to check it out when you get another track done.

[Matthew Skye]

Ok, I was just checking out fruitiloops for the first time in a while... the song loses points for using samples that come with fruitiloops... yep, pretty much.